The Critiquing Of Blogs: Camila Carvahlo

Her blog was quite good i learned decent amount from it. i would give it a good grade of a B or B+.

The Critiquing Of Blogs: Anthony Alberico

I thought anthonys video was really well put together i'd probably give it the highest grade in the class of an A just because it was so well put together

What Grade Should I Get On My Autobiography...

I think I should get a B- on this project. I think I should because surprisingly i did actually work very hard on it and it took a while to make all the music i put into it and find all the pictures i put into it. So overall I do think I should get a B- maybe C+ because i worked hard but it still could have been better... Maybe if i edited it a little better it could have turned out better.

Journalism Assignment: Project 2

We were told to start a second project for our journalism class with a partner, so we are deciding to write our own then combine them.

It all started when Israel became a state on May 15th, 1948, the Arab countries did not enjoy this so they declared war on the newfound country. But in 1949 Israel and the Arab nations signed a pact saying that Egypt would retain hold of Gaza.

Israel is attacking Gaza because Gaza is a Arab controlled territory in the Israeli area and continue to see attacks from them.

This whole conflict began because Israel was displaced after World War II and Palestine took control and Israelis needed a homeland to call their own.


In January, 1957, the U.N. told Israel, France, and Britain to take their forces out of Egypt.

In June, 1967, Israel engaged in a armed conflict with Egypt, Jordan, And Syria. By the end of this conflict Israel controlled Gaza And Sinai.

In March of 1979, Israel and Egypt signed a peace treaty, they also agreed that the Palestinians in Jordan, Gaza, and the West Bank(all Israel controlled land) would provide self-rule.

On September 2nd, 1982, U.S. president Ronald Reagan called for Jordanian supervision in the Palestinian territories, Israel Rejected the plan and said it could cause a danger in their security.

20 years later Hamas was founded which is A Palestinian lead organization started an uprising. Hamas was started by the Muslim Brotherhood members

On December 18th, 1992, Israel carried out an Expulsion of 400 Palestinians to Lebanon which was almost as bad as the 6 day war.

In 2007 Hamas Seized Gaza.

The Critiquing Of Blogs: Myself

A lot of people say your personality reflects your work, well... not me... This i would give a "C" or at dire best a "C+" mainly because the music and audio in general got messed up... And that does not even begin to describe how bad I think it is. Although I'm sure that I'm just a harsh critiquer.

The Critiquing Of Blogs: Nicole Panza

I Thought it was very good overall as well the only that i didn't like was that the sound quality was too "in your face" other than that I thought it was well thought out and well designed. I would give it a "B" or "B+" as well.

The Critiquing Of Blogs: Harrison Ford

I thought it was very well played out and overall good but one thing that bothered me was by the end of it I felt really old and tired... I don't know why maybe it was the jazzy big band music towards the end ( Although I do like that kind of music a decent amount). But overall I would give it a "B" or a "B+"